Please HELP ME (a little)... :-)

petermeachem · Post by **petermeachem** » Sun Nov 23, 2003 11:24 pm

Your English is extremely good. The only things I spotted were

A little German on http://www.motoandmore.com/correio/en/thecarriage.htm

The message box on the contact page could do with being bigger, there is quite a lot to type in..

This "For presenting you an offer we kindly ask you to name the addresses of where to pick up and where to deliver the freight." is slightly awkward.
"So that we can make you an offer, please tell us the addresses of where to pick up and deliver the freight."
might be better.

On http://www.motoandmore.com/correio/en/aboutus.htm you refer to "bicycle couriers", better as "motorbike couriers" .

Very good idea, wishing you the best of luck.

cowboy · Post by **cowboy** » Mon Nov 24, 2003 8:14 am

Christian,
Insted of:
We offer our services at each weather condition.
Try:
We deliver rain or shine.
or
We deliver in all weather.

(I'ed hate to have to back that claim up when the roads are icy or on in a driving winter rain)

Is this any help?

Di_Berlin · Post by **Di_Berlin** » Mon Nov 24, 2003 11:45 am

Hallo Christian,
dein Englisch ist wirklich beneidenswert - Hut ab!!!

Wie siehts mit Portugiesisch aus? Tue mich diesbezüglich sehr schwer.

LG
diane

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Mon Nov 24, 2003 12:28 pm

THE MOTORCYCLE COURIER
VERSÃO PORTUGUESA | DEUTSCHE VERSION

» About us
» What we transport
» Where we transport to
» Our service
» The carriage
» Contact

THIS IS WHAT WE DO...
The "moto & more - motorcycle courier" we`re specialists in transporting small goods and documents which have to be delivered from the sender to the consignee in the shortest time possible

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We transport for example the following...
· Letters - faster than mail.
· Documents - any kind of important documents that
the consignee has to receive as an original the same day
· Plans and outlines - large size drawing plans and outlines
are transported in watertight rolls
· Smaller parcels - we transport smaller goods
without special packaging
· Films - (Video) films directly to the lab and back
· Electronic data - CDs / floppy disks / other backups
instead of lengthy online transmissions

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If we cant deliver it ...ferget it..

Give us a call...make our day ....and yours!

MADE A FEW CHANGES TO THE TEXT...WILL LOOK AT THE OTHER PAGES

MARTIN

Christian · Post by **Christian** » Tue Nov 25, 2003 5:04 pm

Olá again!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH for helping so far...
I will correct my mistakes as soon as the f****** telephone line in Sesmarias will be OK again. The rain a few days ago made my telephone KAPUTT (which is German for 'out of order'). As long as it won´t work I´ll have to Login in some Carvoeiro www-Café.

See you soon!

Ah! Somebody asked me for my knowledge of the portuguese language. Unfortunanately I have none...

If there is anybody outhere who is talking this difficult language I would like to ask him for help as well.

See you soon!

digger · Post by **digger** » Tue Nov 25, 2003 6:18 pm

...........and what is f****** german for?

Di_Berlin · Post by **Di_Berlin** » Wed Nov 26, 2003 7:32 am

He Digger - keep cool

!!!

The f...... german Di

digger · Post by **digger** » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:00 pm

esta bem, querida

Di_Berlin · Post by **Di_Berlin** » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:24 pm

@ digger
A multa! Desejo-o um dia agradável!

digger · Post by **digger** » Wed Nov 26, 2003 12:35 pm

beijos

Di_Berlin · Post by **Di_Berlin** » Wed Nov 26, 2003 3:27 pm

@ digger

Christian · Post by **Christian** » Thu Nov 27, 2003 5:22 pm

digger wrote:...........and what is f****** german for?

It's for Ferdammt...
Which means: Bloody

Christian · Post by **Christian** » Wed Dec 03, 2003 7:15 pm